International air travel has a negative impact upon the environment and should, therefore, be restricted.
Do you agree or not?
Given the volume of air journey in the last one or two decades, many people think that it has a very negative impact on our environment and should, therefore, be restricted. Air journey has some kinds of adverse impact on the environment but the impact is not too serious to be restricted.
Because of the reduced price of the air ticket and the increasing number of the tourist facilities around the world, the number of the tourist has been increasing rapidly all over the world. People now prefer plane journey over other means not only in the case of foreign journey but also for local journey. This increased number of air journey has definitely some adverse impact on the environment. It has been reported that carbon dioxide emitted from the aeroplanes hit directly the upper atmosphere layer which prevents the harmful sun rays from entering into our cities.
But it is still questionable whether restriction on air travel will really reduce the impact on the environment. To exemplify it, if there is a high limitation on air journeys, people will start relying on other means of transportation, like bus, train or ship, which will also emit high amount of carbon dioxide. Besides, people will suffer a lot as bus or train journey requires much more time than air journey. The most noticeable effect will be on the tourism industries, which contribute a lot to many countries’ economy, like Nepal or Thailand. These industries will collapse after placing a high restriction on air journey as most visitors will be discouraged to travel by bus or train which is very uncomfortable.
In conclusion, air journey has some negative impacts on our environment. But, placing a limitation on air travel will not be a sensible decision as the disadvantages will be much more than advantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, really, so, still, therefore, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98675496689 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83364784457 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496688741722 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2800595331 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.846153846 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2307692308 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15384615385 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228835880046 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1041027958 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0993219586799 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183594332205 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12980659547 0.056905535591 228% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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