The international community must act immediately to ensure that all countries reduce the consumption for fossil fuels such as gas, oil and coal. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement? Give your own opinion.
'Fossil fuels are non renewable resources which helps in development of an economy'. One of the most controversial issues today leads to that, why should countries reduce their usage of fossil fuels? I completely agree with the statement that people should consume less non renewable resources. In the upcoming paragraphs, I am going to give reasons for this phenomenon and explain them thoroughly with some examples and assertions.
There are several number of things which have great impact on development of an economy and fossil fuel is also one of them. There are different types of reasons that why we should use less fossil fuels. Firstly, the foremost reason is that, these non renewable resources such as coal and petrol take millions of years for preparation; while, its clear that saving them is highly significant due to the period of time they take. A good illustration is, that in every country vehicles are becoming a basic daily routine for people and this is not possible to run them without petrol.
The second prominent reason for saving fossil is that, these resources should be reliable for future development of country so upcoming generation can live easily and they will not face any consequences. If a country do not have personal production of basic fossil fuels such as coal and petrol then they have to purchase them from other countries. However, material like coal, petrol and many other gases helps in industries for production of different types of products; meanwhile, these products incline gross domestic product of an economy. A good illustration is, in India there is production of one of the major fossil fuel petrol and many countries purchase that from india, due to that it increases foreign exchange of the country as well.
In conclusion, I would like to say that if development is an important factor than all resources should be there and, I tend to believe that people should consume less non renewable resources as we can save them for our future generation and also increase our development of nation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun number seems to be countable; consider using: 'several numbers'.
Suggestion: several numbers
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, so, then, well, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1715.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01461988304 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65835146842 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.8680200702 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.923076923 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3076923077 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165527481424 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682034582733 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0312619730904 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104562501519 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.051474263346 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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