International tourism is now more common than ever before. Some feel that this is a positive trend, while other s do not. What are your opinion on this?
In modern society traveling abroad become more popular. Some people believe that it has advantages, however, others do not. This essay agrees that it is a negative trend because it will lead to a lack of domestic tourism and economic disadvantages.
Local tourism could have a negative impact because of the shortage of tourists. Some people claim that international journeys attract more visitors and if this phenomenon will be promoted more, domestic journeys can be disappeared. Potential tourists would like to discover different unusual places for themselves, that's why they have the motivation to go to overseas destinations. A recent study found that
It is widely believed that international trips do not positively influence the economy of the tourists' country of residence. It is true that for visiting abroad we should have some fundings to cover our stay in a new temporary region. Moreover, a lot of place for visiting is very expensive. This finance will be moved out of the state treasury. Research shows that tourists spend at least 1,500 US dollars for a one week period of their trip abroad.
On the other hand, moving to other countries can give a chance to learn more about new cultures. Furthermore, a traveler can have access to various resources that he or she does not have in his native countries, such as oceans and mountains. Another good choice for oversea tourism is that we can find new friends.
In conclusion, global tourism can be a reason for at least 2 disadvantages, such as negative effects on domestic tourism and in a bad financial situation in the living country of tourists. We should also take into consideration that discovering oversea places can teach us about different cultures, we can meet new friends and enjoy nature that we don't have.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, at least, in conclusion, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1508.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06040268456 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.809308111 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587248322148 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2972556145 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.25 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8125 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160912759276 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569821760102 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562591552406 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101384284415 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0660653350496 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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