International tourism is now more common than ever before Some feel that this is a positive trend while others do not What are your opinions on this

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International tourism is now more common than ever before. Some feel that this is a positive
trend, while others do not.
What are your opinions on this?

Nowadays, tourism industry becomes popular among all the residents of the globe. Some people argued that tourism as a lucrative industry in any country has advantages that are temping. In contrast, others believe investing and focusing on this trend might have negative consequences. In my opinion, benefits considerably outweigh the risks.
As a matter of fact, although relationship between tourism and the environment seems complex, this relationship involves many activities that can have adverse environmental effects. In other words, many of these effects are related to the creation of public infrastructure such as roads, airports and different facilities such as accommodation, hotels, restaurants, etc. Thus, the negative impact of tourism development can destroy environmental resources.
Firstly, one of the advantages of tourism is getting to know other cultures. Indeed, this subject has brought people closer together and reduced cultural differences to some extent. Conclusively, the tourist imports his culture and takes souvenirs from cultural of the host country. In fact, this trend can greatly leads to world peace.
Secondly and more importantly, tourism will create jobs in country. Consequently, im many countries tourism is the main force for economic improvement and growth, and by providing a strategic opportunity to diversify the local economy, create jobs and generate income.
In conclusion, it is clear that tourism has a positive impact on modern life due to providing opportunity for cross-cultural exchange and it also drives creating jobs and economic growth.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 315, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
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Line 4, column 90, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
... jobs in country. Consequently, im many countries tourism is the main force for economic ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, thus, in conclusion, in contrast, in fact, such as, as a matter of fact, in my opinion, in other words

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1362.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.72268907563 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06716933295 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621848739496 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.7619494327 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2857142857 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7142857143 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196202628129 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658010572328 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409693392732 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0987252812676 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460361351689 0.056905535591 81% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.6 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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