International travel is becoming cheaper, and countries are opening their doors to more and more tourists. Do the advantages of increased tourism outweigh disadvantages?
It is agrued that international travel has become cheaper, and nations are oping their doors to more and more tourists. From my point of view, in some situation i mostly agree with this notion because of its practical in the modern era. The following essay will analyse this statement in detail.
First of all, in the international world and with the appearence of new innovation that the requirment of individuals have increased graduately, so diplomacy with other nation is greatly significant for the society. Not only will increased tourism improve the adolesence social experience which teenagers have more opportunities to interact with forign speaker, but also traditional knowledge and valuable information can be passed on by their aboad friend, improving their mentality life. Furthermore, more international relationship can be created by people such as over sea friends who have numerous benefits for their occupation. To illustrate, there was a vurvey by Erik Dosky, the famous scientist and professor which was about the success of europian countries where have appropriate diplomacy plans. The statistic showed that there are nearly every nation have got a plenty of achevement in their economic background.
However, we can not negate the drawbacks of this phenomenon for the population life. Lacking of cutural may lead various unneccessary conflict or controvasial and also socioeconomy will be wided which reducing the notion development. Moreover, many governments take advantage from this investment for their own revenue, harmful ìnluence will be led by this action to the young generation.
To conclude, by my agrument from the essay that i totally agree with this statement, but it still have some nagative aspect for people. Tthe government need to have clear plans to advance their postgradutes for the nation development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ill analyse this statement in detail. First of all, in the international world...
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...evement in their economic background. However, we can not negate the drawbacks...
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...y this action to the young generation. To conclude, by my agrument from the ess...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43402777778 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9614595343 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621527777778 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9807109972 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.384615385 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187419766876 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692502588879 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11758236931 0.0667982634062 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108520903637 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0874814530196 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.05 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.