International travel can make people prejudiced rather than broad minded. Why people fail to benefit when they travel? What we can do to improve their understanding of the countries they visit?
Travelling is regarded as the finest way to broaden people’s horizons by meeting people from all walks of life and experiencing diverse cultures. On the downside, international travel has also made tourists judge other cultures rather than open their mind. There are several reasons for this tendency and steps which could be done taken to deepen visitors’ knowledge of the country they want to set foot on.
The first and the main foremost reason for this outcome might be the gap in cultures. What is considered a specialty in one place may not hold any value for outcomers. For example, Vietnamese inhabitants have considered balut and blood pudding as their signature dishes for ages. However, in the eyes of foreigners, eating these kinds of food is a the behavior of a barbarian. To avoid culture shocks, tourists have to make full use of the Internet to search for information about their destination of interest. Tour guides also play a vital role in educating foreigners about the local values to make them respect rather than look down upon it.
Another reason causing the problem is stereotyping, which results mostly from bad experiences with street vendors. It’s an usual practice for them to sell defective products and prey on unsuspecting tourists without realizing that they are damaging the image of their locals. Consequently, this will create a negative impression on foreigners and shape their thinking about the hosts. To tackle this problem, authorities have to create and manage places where vendors can gather and sell their products commodities at fixed prices.
In conclusion, there are two leading factors that cloud tourists’ judgment on the places they visit. However, efforts in the right direction can help overcome the problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, however, if, look, may, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25174825175 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78140644641 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657342657343 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.7984811735 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 100.133333333 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0666666667 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187516855631 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538466290374 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450467515867 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112379102932 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569566566031 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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