International travel has become more affordable and many countries are opening their doors to increase the number of tourists. What are advantages and disadvantages of this?
It is a recent issue that international travel is becoming cheaper these days and the majority of nations are willing to welcome the mass of foreign travelers. There are several advantages and disadvantages from this tropical issue which I will elucidate more below.
Regarding the benefit, to offer low-cost travelling significantly allows explorers to find numerous destinations within one countries. Take traveler vlogger as an example, fascinating content which exhibits unique cultural festivals and hidden-gem breathtaking views could captivate viewers to watch their vlog. Thereby, not only those people receive the benefits of increasing subscribers but also a country will gain free-promotion totheir destination. Moreover, the higher number of international visitors may enhance state revenue. To explicate, France which prioritizes tourism sectors by providing multiple historic and artistic buildings, thus, this nation both successfully achieves highest revenue on tourism and keep attracting wolrdwide visitors.
Conversely, foreign visitors who firstly come over to those destinations could experience scam and fraud. Some unreasonable costs of accomodation and transportation become a main concern of touritsts to avoid unexpected incidents, also leave no bad impression on their holiday. In addition, the more massive global tourism is, the greater emission will be since such activities release atrocious carbon foot-print. It is true that non-native settlements produce amount of domestic waste which will inflict the damage of ecosystem balance.
In conclusion, the positive side of promoting low-cost budget and welcoming foreign tourists will provide best experiences for them as well as bigger national income. Meanwhile, the negative side of this idea might lead to tourist scams and piles of carbon foot-print.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 121, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one country', 'a country', or simply 'countries'?
Suggestion: one country; a country; countries
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'achieves the highest'.
Suggestion: achieves the highest
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, thus, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1580.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.96226415094 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02827778748 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.732075471698 0.561755894193 130% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9011152635 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.538461538 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9230769231 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181213362951 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559800729039 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438756157473 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103167134646 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528259651151 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.8 50.2224549098 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.29 12.4159519038 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.18 8.58950901804 130% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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