International travel has many advantages to both travelers and the country visited. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages
These days, the number of people choosing to travel to other countries has greatly grown. Despite some obvious drawbacks of this trend, I believe that these are outweighed by the benefits to the host country as well as tourists.
On the one hand, there are a variety of major disadvantages when the increasingly large number of forgein visitors. Firstly, the development of international travel can cause environmental pollution. because of the amount of waste released into the environment from hotels, restaurants and public places has dramatically increased, leading to more severe soil and water contamination. As a result, this has an adverse impact on the quality life of local individuals. Another negative effect is large areas of natural habitats are being destroyed and replaced by luxury resorts, bars, entertainment places. This puts many animal and plant species in danger of extinction, which could contribute to destinations that have lost the glories of nature.
on the other hand, i believe that the advantages are more significant than such downsides. Firstly, international tourism plays an essential role in any nation’s economy and the local people which receives a rising number of tourists from overseas. Normally, travelers spend a wide range of money on goods, foods, transportations, which can help citizens have more employment opportunities to improve their living standards. For example, many people earn money by converting their homes to hostels so that tourists could stay as paying guests or they sell products which represent customs of the country. Moreover, it is necessary for some people, especially younger people, to boost understanding. they will experience different things, including cultures, languages, people’s character in other nations, this not only brings value life lessons but also helps them ease anxiety disorders or stress of daily work.
In conclusion, I would argue that international tourism brings more benefits than drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, well, as to, for example, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1693.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55081967213 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99406561668 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649180327869 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2072137068 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.866666667 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53333333333 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152895535633 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.045951418453 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048276424402 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0849263180763 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353058851481 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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