International travel makes people prejudiced rather than broad-minded? What are its causes and measures can be taken to solve this problem?
it is irrefutable that international tourism has taken mammoth dimensions. Unfortunately, sometimes, international tourism create tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. In this essay I intend to delve into the causes of the situation and suggest some ways to alleviate the problem.
The most important reason why some are opposed to international tourism is that tourists may unknowingly show disrespect for local culture. For instance, we generally cover our heads in a religious place. A tourist may not do so or take his shoes inside a temple. this may offend the local people. sometimes, youngsters may be attracted towards the western culture, which the tourists bring with them and many may find this as a threat to the local culture.
Moreover, the tourist dollar may not be helping the local people. we all know that tourists stay in five star hotels and enjoy the best facilities. they may be taking two showers a day, where as the local people may not have enough water to drink. this has been the case in Shimla, which is a very popular hill station in Himachal Pradesh, India. On top of that, when tourists buy souvenirs from local artisans, they bargain a lot. The poor artisans, who look up to tourists for their livelihood, end up earning the bare minimum. finally, tourism creates pollution, which helps nobody. we are all suffering the consequences of global warming.
The solutions are not simple. we cannot discourage tourism. it is the backbone of many economies of the world. First of all, the tour operators should take the onus of guiding the tourists about the main things of local culture. Secondly, the tourists should stay with locals as paying guests. this would be a win-win situation for both. local people would earn the and the tourist would taste the local culture. finally, ecotourism should be promoted. For example, if an elephant ride is possible the tourist should avoid using car. After all, a good tourist is one- who takes away nothing, but photographs, and leaves behind nothing, but footprints.
Summing up, international tourism does have a downside to it but many steps can be taken to lessen the negative effects.
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but, finally, first, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, after all, for example, for instance, first of all, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1834.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02465753425 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67868157116 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567123287671 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 16.0721442886 168% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5518437132 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.9259259259 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5185185185 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.96296296296 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123475885759 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.034682818564 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444935601998 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0963889670638 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680248784243 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.24 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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