The Internet allows to stay connected with each other no matter where we are.on the other hand it also I also latest and encourage people not to socialise .to what extent do you agree or disagree.

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The Internet allows to stay connected with each other no matter where we are.on the other hand it also I also latest and encourage people not to socialise .to what extent do you agree or disagree.

it is debateable issue whether the develop of internet in individual has positive or evasive impact on socialisation. I ,however, agree with this former notion but I believe that internet helpful in many ways.

To Bagin with, some individual consider that internet is main cause of isolation among people. Since people like to spend free time on internet and they never give time to their family members .they think spending time on internet is more enjoyable activities rather then time spend with relatives. however , there are number of merits of internet which helps to remain closed with others. The prominent reason is that due to number of various sites individuals are able to makes new friends through social media whether they are unknown. different types of people who belongs to different regions are connected with each other . As a consequence, people know the variations of society and it helps to remove the cultural diversity.

In addition to thisanother significant factor is that owing to high speed internet service it is easy to connect with others because number of facilities are provided to customers such as video conferencing .which helps to remain in contact with family members and friends without actually meeting. As a result, the distance among family members are removed because these service.moreover,internet is very fast source of communicate as well as not very expensive as compared to other sources.with the help of various sites person can done work and do not take much time because it saves time. For instance,international trade are possible because of internet yet it provides faster services and feedback.consequently, the relationship among countries ms can develop through the internet and helps to enhance the feelings of brotherhood.

To conclude, although, internet has some detrimental effects but I believe that the usage of internet has more merits to stay connected with others.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, consequently, however, if, moreover, so, then, well, for instance, such as, as a result, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32899022801 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17086050846 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5667752443 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.5169390783 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.333333333 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5833333333 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 74.0 5.01903807615 1474% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170548514823 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697346079331 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462799579534 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111105427737 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0185754264927 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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