The internet is a great course of information and has opened up opportunities for people to learn all over the world. Is all information reliable on internet? What could be done to control information online?
Internet has boomed as one of the greatest source of information in recent years and has tapened ways for people to gain information over the globe. This essay discuss about the relat reliability of information found online and the ways to control the flow of in formation.
In many aspect, the online in formation are tend to untrustworthy. Due to the increasing popularity of internet, and these days so called. news gource to gain are providing wrong information so as fame. This trend not only provide.. Palse details but also, hinders some one's reputation. For instance, In recent days, one of the news smpany manipulated wrong facts about a social worker which drastically. increased hatred among the people for him.
Control of information is a tough task but not impossible. Setting up a new law for false in for- mation and verification by host cane be a major course of action in order to restrain. information. Firstly, promulgation of law 80 as to provide trust -worthy information and it's implementation can have a vital role to Keep in check the information being uploaded. Secondly, the fact that is being passed to the public can be verft verified by the certain administration which not only control the informatio but provide a generous details to in which people can rely on. For example, in fo provided by a trustworthy source geems to be true than that of unknown source and the law can punish the source if found untrue.
In conclusion, learning through internet is good but faulty information can create several problems and create wrong influence. Moreover, law making process can contribute to standardization of details.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 4, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun aspect seems to be countable; consider using: 'many aspects'.
Suggestion: many aspects
...control the flow of in formation. In many aspect, the online in formation are tend to un...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 45, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'tended'.
Suggestion: tended
...any aspect, the online in formation are tend to untrustworthy. Due to the increasing...
^^^^
Line 6, column 140, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: News
... of internet, and these days so called. news gource to gain are providing wrong info...
^^^^
Line 6, column 231, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
... so as fame. This trend not only provide.. Palse details but also, hinders some on...
^^
Line 6, column 406, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Increased
...bout a social worker which drastically. increased hatred among the people for him. Con...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 186, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Information
... course of action in order to restrain. information. Firstly, promulgation of law 80 as to...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 207, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...order to restrain. information. Firstly, promulgation of law 80 as to provide tru...
^^
Line 8, column 533, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'detail'?
Suggestion: detail
...l the informatio but provide a generous details to in which people can rely on. For exa...
^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 83, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s good but faulty information can create several problems and create wrong influe...
^^
Line 10, column 139, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ms and create wrong influence. Moreover, law making process can contribute to sta...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04363636364 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94918730926 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563636363636 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.1984184197 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6875 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1875 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309515809395 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0926763062343 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793438840332 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18658013529 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0842143803613 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 4, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun aspect seems to be countable; consider using: 'many aspects'.
Suggestion: many aspects
...control the flow of in formation. In many aspect, the online in formation are tend to un...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 45, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'tended'.
Suggestion: tended
...any aspect, the online in formation are tend to untrustworthy. Due to the increasing...
^^^^
Line 6, column 140, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: News
... of internet, and these days so called. news gource to gain are providing wrong info...
^^^^
Line 6, column 231, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
... so as fame. This trend not only provide.. Palse details but also, hinders some on...
^^
Line 6, column 406, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Increased
...bout a social worker which drastically. increased hatred among the people for him. Con...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 186, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Information
... course of action in order to restrain. information. Firstly, promulgation of law 80 as to...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 207, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...order to restrain. information. Firstly, promulgation of law 80 as to provide tru...
^^
Line 8, column 533, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'detail'?
Suggestion: detail
...l the informatio but provide a generous details to in which people can rely on. For exa...
^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 83, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s good but faulty information can create several problems and create wrong influe...
^^
Line 10, column 139, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ms and create wrong influence. Moreover, law making process can contribute to sta...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04363636364 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94918730926 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563636363636 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.1984184197 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6875 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1875 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309515809395 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0926763062343 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793438840332 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18658013529 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0842143803613 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.