The past 30 years have seen a significant transformation in peole's daily life since the internet was first introduced into the world. Although it is undeniable that the internet is inherently dual use in the same way as any other powerful technology, I believe its benifits certainly outweigh the drawbacks for two following reasons.
The first innovation brought by the internet is in the way we communicate. No longer does people travel over a long distance to have a face-to-face conversation, we nowaday can easily set a global meeting through the computer's screen. There are also hundreds of incredibly useful tools, namely email, internet messenger program, which make the contact with loved ones happened in a blink of an eye. Some people would argue that detrimental effects of internet like encouraging excessive virtual connection in young generation have been becoming more and more prevalent. In spite of this, most of us still have benifited greatly from this time effective way of communication.
Second, with widespeard connection to the internet, information has almost turned into common property of mankind. In earlier times, people spent many hours on reading, researching reams of books in order to refine the needed material. Now, thanks to the internet, information is widely shared, and then can be accessed with just a few clicks and keystrokes.
To sum up, despite of negative by-product, the internet has an irreplaceable position in modern life because of its influence on communication and information flows.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, so, still, then, in spite of, to sum up, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1302.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33606557377 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99310548799 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.69262295082 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.338855904 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.363636364 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1818181818 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.36363636364 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187171076022 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596680741243 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465552147055 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0909752890896 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483884212613 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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