The pie charts show information about the proportion of water used in three major domains (agriculture, industry and residential) in San Diego, California and the world generally.
It is clear that residential usage takes up the most amount of water consumption both in San Diego and California. By contrast, around the world, the vast majority of water is utilised for agricultural purpose.
Residents in San Diego consume the most amount of the county's water, accounting for exactly three-fifths of the total intake, compared to just 39% and 8% for those living in California and the rest of the world respectively.
Agriculture makes up 69% of the worldwide water usage. This is 41% higher than the percentage of water used in California, and four time as much as the percentage in San Diego.
On the other hand, industrial usage consitutes the proportion in San Diego and the world, with 23% of the consumption. The figure is slightly higher for industry section in California, at 33%.
- The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car bus or train between 1970 and 2030 67
- The graph below shows UK acid rain emissions measured in millions of tonnes from four different sectors between 1990 and 2007 84
- The Internet has dramatically altered our lives over the past few decades Although some of these changes have been negative the overall effect of this technology has been positive What are your opinions on this 56
- Everybody should be allowed admission to university study programs regardless of their level of academic ability Agree or disagree Give reasons and example 43
- the pie charts and table gives information about the total value and sources of fish imported to the US between 1988 and 2000 86
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 83, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'domains'' or 'domain's'?
Suggestion: domains'; domain's
...proportion of water used in three major domains agriculture, industry and residential i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 836.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09756097561 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93423858907 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567073170732 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5557950186 43.030603864 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.5 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.625 5.23603664747 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.466918814583 0.215688989381 216% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.184306692124 0.103423049105 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0955639406211 0.0843802449381 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248328446766 0.15604864568 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054784593432 0.0819641961636 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 11.4329268293 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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