In the ultra-modern epoch, it is part of the debate that the Internet has changed our lives from earlier to few decades. An equal number opines in favor because we have instant information, fast work, however, others are hesitant to it by saying because of internet Time spending as well as health-related issues were increased drastically. In my view, I partially agree, the following paragraphs would cast light on my personal perspective.
To begin with, although the internet has some disadvantages as there are multifarious reasons are possible for my outlook. The first and most prominent one is we find information immediately. As a result, almost every piece of information is available on the internet and whenever there is an emergency to information about something, the internet is the source that can help you in this matter. To justify the standpoint, there is
the epitome of Google Search is the most widely used search engine in the world. Furthermore, we can work immediately and efficiently. as in past years, there was a gap between transferring the information from one place to another whereas, the internet is the tool that sends information within seconds.
On the second thought, a couple of reasons drives me to consider the opposite notation as well. On searching proper reference no doubt internet is the best source of information but in this generation, there is too much information are available on the internet due to large competitions and hence it is difficult to find an exact or proper reference for any work. To further strengthen this view, we don't move our body for doing anything on the internet, no doubt it gives comfort, however, it also gives health-related problems such as back pain, headaches, itching of eyes and many more.
In recapitulation, it is true that the internet has changed our life by send information in seconds or we can find any information with moving here and there. But at some times it also spending most of our times just to finding the information and health-related issues. I personally feel we should use the Internet to gain knowledge, yet the downside should not be glossed over
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- WRITING TASK 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task Write about the following topic The Internet has dramatically altered our lives over the past few decades Although some of these changes have been negative the overall effect of this technology 80
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: too
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Suggestion: As
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, second, so, then, well, whereas, no doubt, such as, as a result, as well as, in my view, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1803.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00833333333 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98917672096 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541666666667 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.2568576088 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.2 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141075595753 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0464196870822 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413942566606 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0792675119927 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0244762747744 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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