Acquiring free of cost knowledge has turned out to be quite easier via cell phones and other electronic gadgets due to the advent of world wide web. I sincerely assert that doing so comprises of myriad of brighter sides, however, the shortcomings of the same cannot be neglected.
Taking into consideration the utmost prominent reasons owing to which the role of internet as a learning mode can be considered of great value as it has just work like a magic for the studious learners because due to it, they are able to acquire unpaid knowledge from web by sitting at any corner of the globe, not only this, but also the presence of world wide mentors has made the learning quite easier and interesting, in annexation to this, it has worked very positively , specially for the remote learners and working individuals who were unable to attend the offline sessions owing to certain family or timing restrictions, to epitomize, Anu Kumari has cleared the toughest exam of India, known as UPSC, just because of the help of the same, consequently, considering this technology as boon would not be wrong.
Although, the the availability of aforementioned notions has made learning process quite easier, there exist few shortcomings too as on the initial basis, as internet works as an instant knowledge provider, many of the times, the wrong uploads are seen over there, which can have detrimental impacts on learners as it all would affect their rudimentary part of the subject, despite this, it has also make the individuals feel that the things available over there is granted which turns out to be the main reason why students delay attending classes, conversely, in offline mode, they attend the sessions much more carefully as per a recent research conducted by the education department of India, it has been witnessed that pupils learn much more effectively in the presence of their guide.
Having analyzed the whole scenario, it can be re-iterated that internet has revolutionized the world of modern education, and it has made numerous mentees successful, however, the darker aspects ought not to be over-looked.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 183, Rule ID: COMPRISES_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of
...e web. I sincerely assert that doing so comprises of myriad of brighter sides, however, the ...
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Line 3, column 352, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: worldwide
...not only this, but also the presence of world wide mentors has made the learning quite eas...
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Line 3, column 352, Rule ID: WORLD_WIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'worldwide'?
Suggestion: worldwide
...not only this, but also the presence of world wide mentors has made the learning quite eas...
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Line 3, column 475, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...n to this, it has worked very positively , specially for the remote learners and w...
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Line 5, column 11, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...s boon would not be wrong. Although, the the availability of aforementioned notions ...
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Line 5, column 11, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...s boon would not be wrong. Although, the the availability of aforementioned notions ...
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Line 5, column 401, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'made'.
Suggestion: made
... the subject, despite this, it has also make the individuals feel that the things av...
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Line 5, column 565, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... delay attending classes, conversely, in offline mode, they attend the sessions m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, conversely, however, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1773.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05128205128 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79254138443 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595441595442 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 70.0 20.2975951904 345% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 313.728162587 49.4020404114 635% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 354.6 106.682146367 332% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 70.2 20.7667163134 338% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.8 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1818632282 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0854971600776 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505720225702 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100313905479 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340214469517 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 37.5 13.0946893788 286% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 0.43 50.2224549098 1% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 30.6 11.3001002004 271% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.19 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.7 8.58950901804 136% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 30.0 10.1190380762 296% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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