The Internet has many disadvantages as it does advantages
To what extent do you agree with this statement?
Today, there are amny modern technilogy for people in the world such as social network, smart phone, air condition... Especially, the Internet is one of the most modern technology. It has become a key tool for obtaining information and for communication all over the world. In my opinion, I complete agree that th Internet has both advantages and disadvantages.
On the one hand, there are many advantages of the Internet. Firstly, people can use a equipment like laptop, smart phone,.. connection the Internet means that people can keep in touch with their friends and family easily through email and social networking websites. For example, if a person has relatives in another country, they can keep in contact using Facebook or Skype. In addition, fiding out information online is much quiker than visiting libraries or making expensive phone calls. Finally, the Internet has made work easier and quicker. For instance, in the past, people often had to travel long distance for meetings for your working and now they can video call instead.
On the other hand, some people believe that the Internet has disadvantages. Firstly, the Internet can makes people lazy. For example,people now do lots of thing online like shopping and socializing, when it might be better for them to do these things in the real world. Secondly, the Internet can be addictive, especially in young people. Young people may spend too much time on the Internet compared to other activities. Furthermore, the Internet contains a lot of information which is not correct. This is because anyone can put anything they want to on the Internet without checked for accurancy or truth.
In conclusion, although it has advantages and disadvantages, the Internet has made life so mcu easier in so many ways. If people use it effectively, it will be an excellent tool.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 84, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...f the Internet. Firstly, people can use a equipment like laptop, smart phone,.. c...
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Line 2, column 84, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'equipment'.
Suggestion: equipment
...f the Internet. Firstly, people can use a equipment like laptop, smart phone,.. connection ...
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Line 2, column 120, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...use a equipment like laptop, smart phone,.. connection the Internet means that peo...
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Line 2, column 121, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...se a equipment like laptop, smart phone,.. connection the Internet means that peop...
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Line 2, column 124, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Connection
...a equipment like laptop, smart phone,.. connection the Internet means that people can keep...
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Line 3, column 103, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'make'
Suggestion: make
...isadvantages. Firstly, the Internet can makes people lazy. For example,people now do ...
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Line 3, column 133, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , people
...ernet can makes people lazy. For example,people now do lots of thing online like shoppi...
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Line 3, column 148, Rule ID: LOTS_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun thing seems to be countable; consider using: 'lots of things'.
Suggestion: lots of things
... people lazy. For example,people now do lots of thing online like shopping and socializing, w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06600660066 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82571474373 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580858085809 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3848646533 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.75 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.15 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126339040922 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0464430522698 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400326986479 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0783784482336 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253484246704 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.53 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.