Internet has played vital role in shaping our lives. But due to this advancement, the question of thinking and acting in same manner has risen. In this essay I will argue how these modifications are making our lives and world economy as efficient as possible.
To begin with, the whole world is now centralized on tip of our thumb. Due to unlimited usages and uninterrupted connectivity, accessing with family and friends even in remote locations has become easy. Furthermore, because of globalization, world economy is able to work in more effective ways. One can manage their finances with the aid of recent researches and statical data available online. Also obtaining any sort of information such as latest news updates, latest trends, any remedies has become handy. For instance, to get latest news no one has to wait for newspaper or any unreliable sources. This is how internet has turned our lives and economy into more convenient way.
Despite this, however, as there is advent various of social media platforms and gadgets life sometimes become painful especially for younger generation. They will try to imitate and act like other social media influencers without thinking by themselves. This can sometimes leads to serious complications as well. The truth behind these digital platforms such as You tube, Instagram or Facebook must be understood by them. Besides this, there are multiple examples seen where due to lack of poor knowledge and sufficient research people lost ample amount of money either in stock market or mutual funds. These are major drawbacks about internet.
To conclude, due to the variety of services offered by internet, it has become absolutely necessary part of everyone’s life as well as of world economy. With the proper precautions and alertness it’s perks are undeniabl
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 397, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the latest'.
Suggestion: , the latest
... information such as latest news updates, latest trends, any remedies has become handy. ...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'get the latest'.
Suggestion: get the latest
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f poor knowledge and sufficient research people lost ample amount of money either...
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Message: Use simply 'necessary'.
Suggestion: necessary
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, so, well, as to, for instance, sort of, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1529.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20068027211 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75048744307 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639455782313 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.3177421526 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.9444444444 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208244332881 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616434545954 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641961830268 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119089564158 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467769446718 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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