The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before. What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and what solutions can you suggest?
Although the internet has revolutionized how information is exchanged and consumed, it has also brought issues that did not previously exist. In this essay, the author will indicate the potential problems and provide possible solutions to tackle the phenomenon.
The first and the most obvious problem should be mentioned is the fact the internet is a toxic place where children could access potentially dangerous websites. It is not denied that there are a multiple number of inappropriate content on the internet that is not made for children, namely pornography sites or violence pictures. Reports on “How shocking content affects adolescents?" from The New York Times clearly pointed out that accidentally accessing pornography children performed 75% more poorly than those who did not. Another factor worth pointing out is the growth of online fraud as well as hacking. Many individuals believe that they are well-protected on social media but in fact, their personal and sensitive information appears to be easily taken away from criminals due to the poor policies of these platforms. Once the criminals are able to get access to this information, it is the matter of time for them to blackmail users. According to a recent research conducted by Reading University on privacy on the internet, 47% of the surveyed said that they are not aware that their information is being public on many platforms.
In order to tackle this problem, the author will hereby dispense possible solutions in various aspects. Parental control and online time limitation would be effective in the battle against inappropriate content on the internet since by doing this, children will be put under their parents supervision and following that, the possibilities for them to access shocking content will significantly decrease. As a result, these contents will gradually vanish from children’s search history. Moreover, in order to overcome the growth of online fraud and hacking, learning about online privacy is a must to users. This is also a responsibility of online service providers to inform users about their privacy status, thereby supplying suitable solutions to the issue to immediately prevent their users. The author believes that once the personal and sensitive information is well-protected, the internet will be clean as before.
In conclusion, the essay has clearly shown the possible dangers of the internet, which are the access of children to inappropriate sites and the scam on the internet. Moreover, the author also suggests ways to tackle the challenges, including parental control and online time limitation along with an upgrade in privacy knowledge
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Suggestion:
...cking content affects adolescents?' from The New York Times clearly pointed ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, well, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2261.0 1615.20841683 140% => OK
No of words: 418.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40909090909 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95015655269 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521531100478 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 700.2 506.74238477 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2400062913 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.0 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5882352941 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23529411765 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167520420743 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592467709513 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503002363695 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130584150681 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468190366465 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 78.4519038076 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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