The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before. What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and what solutions can you suggest?
Although the internet has revolutionized how information is exchanged and consumed, it has also brought issues that did not previously exist. In this essay, the author will indicate the potential problems and provide possible solutions to tackle the phenomenon.
The first and the most obvious problem should be mentioned is the fact that children could access potentially dangerous websites. It is not denied that there are a multiple number of inappropriate content on the internet that is not made for children, namely pornography sites or violence pictures. Reports on “How shocking content affects adolescents?" from The New York Times clearly pointed out that accidentally accessing pornography children performed 75% more poorly than those who did not. Another worth pointing out issue is the growth of online fraud as well as hacking. Many individuals believe that they are well-protected on social media but in fact, their personal and sensitive information appears to be easily taken away from criminals due to the poor policies of these platforms. Once the criminals are able to get access to this information, it is the matter of time for them to blackmail users. According to a recent research conducted by Reading University on privacy on the internet, 47% of the surveyed said that they are not aware that their information is being public on many platforms.
In order to tackle this problem, the author will hereby dispense possible solutions. Parental control and online time limitation would be effective in the battle against inappropriate content on the internet. It cannot be denied that by doing this, children will be put under their parents supervision and following that, the possibilities for them to access shocking content will decrease. Moreover, in order to overcome the growth of online fraud and hacking, learning about online privacy is a must to users. This is also a responsibility of online service providers to inform users about their privacy status, thereby supplying suitable solutions to the issue. The author believes that once the personal and sensitive information is well-protected, the internet will be clean as before.
In conclusion, the essay has clearly shown the possible dangers of the internet, which are the access of children to inappropriate sites and the scam on the internet. Moreover, the author also suggests ways to tackle the challenges, including parental control and online time limitation along with an upgrade in privacy knowledge
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, moreover, so, well, in conclusion, in fact, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2120.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 395.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36708860759 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93454088462 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516455696203 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 657.0 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1733434775 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.705882353 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2352941176 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23529411765 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162209235036 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573341826676 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471677297737 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126965414021 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500335387802 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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