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there are lots of people who think that history is one of the most important subjects in school, however, some other people believe that science and technology are more important than history.
people who claim that history is one of the most important disciplines believed that history has equally important with some other essential subjects such as management because history plays an important role in the development of society. For example, when a government makes a decision or a policy usually depends on the not only result of the poll but also historical events, cases, and data. Thus, the extent of proficiency of history influence the methodology of someone, government, and country, and school need to teach their students history well for society.
While some other people suggest that science and technology are more important than history. The reason is that modern need more science and technology talents to make more new hi-tech devices to make people have a better life. Moreover, there are more and more technology companies appear so science talents can find a job easier than people who major in history.
In my opinion, history has equal status with subjects like science and technology because history is useful as science. history is not limited to do a job regarding archaeology. history can provide a reference. For instance, management and science both have history so modern studies can be guided more or less by history. Including scientists, they also need to study learn the history of the particular field and extract experience from history.
Overall, learning history is necessary for students although someone who would like to be a scientist also needs to learn history.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: History
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21299638989 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61094952765 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501805054152 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.870913969 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.076923077 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3076923077 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0769230769 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0417671644579 0.244688304435 17% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0204798481826 0.084324248473 24% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0134152401361 0.0667982634062 20% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0260327346229 0.151304729494 17% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00809483815431 0.056905535591 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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