Internet social media have become very popular. To what extent do you think this is a good or bad thing? Why do you think this is the case?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Now a days, the Internet social media is booming and becoming famous, day by day.
In my opinion, this is a good thing for poor people, because internet social media is the best opportunity to them for achieving their goals. For example, tiktok star, halo star, YouTube star. For instance, in application of social media of tiktok ,which people can make videos and whole world see that video. Therefore, they famous in the world. Furthermore, internet social media helped to communication between person to person. Some people live in a different countries and they want to communicate with their relatives, therefore; they easily communicate on WhatsApp, Instagram and hike. For instance, my sister live in Canada and we can not communicate through offline voice call because it's expensive. However, we communicate through the WhatsApp with video call and voice call also.
According to me, social networks have become a crucial part of many us. We don't even notice this but as soon as we open our desktops or laptops to access the web, we subconsciously open our favourite social network just to see about the updates received. Businesses have noticed the value of social network in our life, and they are using different techniques to promote their products. For example, the food delivery company namely tomato is earning money by online social network and it's also give the opportunity to some people make their own business.
In conclusion, it may be stated that the internet social media is a good thing. To some extent, approximately 70%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
Now a days, the Internet social media is booming a...
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Line 1, column 5, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
Now a days, the Internet social media is booming a...
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Line 3, column 249, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...in application of social media of tiktok ,which people can make videos and whole w...
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Line 3, column 787, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...WhatsApp with video call and voice call also. According to me, social networ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...with video call and voice call also. According to me, social networks have be...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...with video call and voice call also. According to me, social networks have become a crucial ...
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Line 5, column 81, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ve become a crucial part of many us. We dont even notice this but as soon as we open...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1297.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06640625 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65293911304 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578125 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.6266978375 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4666666667 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0666666667 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46666666667 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157025623965 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.057399990075 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509659901159 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108576333568 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0217780193783 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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