Internet social media have become very popular. To what extent do you think this is a good or bad thing? Why do you think this is the case?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is commonly thought that internet social media have become human life nowadays. While there are several benefits to using social media, I believe that it is an undesirable development.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why social networks have a significant impact on people's lives. One of the main reasons is that social media platforms such as TikTok, Facebook, and other numerous applications are environments that facilitate users to earn money. On those platforms, individuals are allowed to run shops that sell a wide variety of goods, for example. Moreover, many people use social media as a money-making tool by becoming KOLs, who have expert knowledge of a specific subject and will collaborate with many brands to promote their products. Another reason is that social media is a place where people can interact with each other for their work or studying, instead of communicating face-to-face.
On the other hand, I would maintain that social networks have a negative impact on many aspects of human life. It must be recognized that many people use social media to earn money by creating bad content. For example, many individuals deliberately post videos with information that causes misunderstandings and arguments. Due to the rapid spread of social networks, it is easier to catch others' attention to help them more famous, so they will earn more money if their videos have more views on TikTok platforms, for instance. Moreover, many people believe this false information. As a result, it will lead to their deceptive thoughts.
In conclusion, while it is true that social media brings several benefits in earning money and communication, it is thus advisable that it is a place where wrong information is easy to spread.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12587412587 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85111507253 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0779554049 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.714285714 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4285714286 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141343390922 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0557176915556 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0334850478637 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.091918828692 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370015589087 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.