We live in an age when many of us usually believe that all factors existing in our life have significant contributions. Therefore, all careers improve and develop the world and I think inventors or doctors have the same position and were an important factor controlling the world in social's life.
First of all, doctors are the career which people often rate in top 1 due to it contribute enormous things to their life. Besides, doctors help people in their health such as health care for the older, and health advice for the younger. For example, in Corona Virus pandemic, doctors sacrificed their personal life to care and help collective life. They were not scare of danger, even had to die to protect people. What is more, doctors not only heal physical health but also mental health, so they become the significant factors to society.
On the other hand, inventors are also one of the careers that controlling and beautifying social life. To begin with, they help their country more modern, bringing lots of products in the country becoming famous all around the world. If people's social life have not inventors, they never develop all skills and life quality because inventors contribute important things that change the world. Rice ATM machine, for instance, invented by Hoang Tuan Anh from Viet Nam was a big step and this product bring Viet Nam be famous in the world.
To draw the conclusion, I strongly agree that doctors were the significant career to impact society, but so are the inventors. Although people compare doctors and inventors, these help life better and better and develop day by day.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 364, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'scared'.
Suggestion: scared
...and help collective life. They were not scare of danger, even had to die to protect p...
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Line 5, column 399, Rule ID: ATM_MACHINE[1]
Message: This phrase is redundant ('M' stands for 'machine'). Use simply 'ATM'.
Suggestion: ATM
...tant things that change the world. Rice ATM machine, for instance, invented by Hoang Tuan A...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i think, such as, first of all, to begin with, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1347.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93406593407 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43501870735 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567765567766 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.1809813984 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 103.615384615 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6153846154 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101017685532 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0384565303582 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.022051253158 0.0667982634062 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0615238996051 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0132887769226 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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