It is better for students at university to live far away from home than to live at home with their parents. What are the advantages and disadvantages of living far from home?
Nowadays, there is a large of people leave their hometown to other cities in order to work or study. As a matter of fact, there is a huge number of students in each educational institution, who live remote places from home, have become better than their peers live closely to family. In my opinion, living far away from home has both advantages and disadvantages.
Living far away from home brings numerous benefits for students. It is able to make you become more and more independent for both work and home. For example, when you were hurt in an accident and none of your friends were known. In such a case, you will be learnt how to take care of yourself and deal with problems. In addition, you are exposed to many different cultures and expanded your mind.
On the other hand, living far away from home consists of many drawbacks for learners. Firstly, you have a few stressed out and confront with financial burdens. For instance, if you study abroad, you may not only pay a colossal expense including university fees, monthly living costs and other payments, but also deal with culture shock. Secondly, your health may be depressed by unscientific lifestyle. In order that you may complete enormous deadline in a short time, one of the most popular ways which reduces tiredness is use stimulants.
In conclusion, even though living far away from your parents get many pros and cons, if you have a chance to live far away from home, you should try it once.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 350, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...oblems. In addition, you are exposed to many different cultures and expanded your mind. On...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a matter of fact, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1217.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73540856031 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46361584241 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614785992218 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8415227969 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.9285714286 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3571428571 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8571428571 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.421933390897 0.244688304435 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156963339418 0.084324248473 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.171989480879 0.0667982634062 257% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.292688192021 0.151304729494 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0972069216462 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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