It can be quite difficult to learn a new language. What do you think are the most difficult aspects of learning a new language?
In recent years, studying new language has become the most essential ability throughout the world. It, however, has some difficulties and requires a lot of effort. Now I would like to mention these problems.
In my opinion, the most challenging aspect of learning foreign language is thinking like native person. If student do not know this core understanding, he or she will mistake continuously to speak second language. For example, when I translate idioms or phrases by thinking my mother tongue, these words cannot mean origin sense in foreign language thus, I do not completely identify what I want to say. In order to study new language without error, people should learn their structure and logic that each country has.
Another problematic part of speaking foreign language is that people think it is hard and impossible while studying. Even though memorizing vocabulary and grammar plays important role for learning, the most fundamental thing is being enjoyable and interested. From my view, notion that new language is hard issue gives pressure so instead of this thought, using hobby will be easier than before to speak. For instance, you should read if you love books or you should watch if you like movies. Also my new foreign acquaintance who is 71 and studying Mongolian said that his only one rule is being fun when he studies.
In conclusion, there is not anything to reach easily. Therefore, ignoring complications and being happy create more useful situation to learn new language.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 494, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...or you should watch if you like movies. Also my new foreign acquaintance who is 71 a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, second, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1261.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10526315789 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68198990955 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668016194332 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9282260277 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0714285714 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6428571429 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326238613883 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0931585289462 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716945975799 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181189992277 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592173752527 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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