It is common practice for some students to take a gap year after graduating high school to work and/or travel. What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
In today’s modernised world few students are preferring to take a leap year after attending high school in pursuit to roam a job. Although many people now see it as dangerous, it still has its faithful supporters. In this essay, we shall look at both sides of this coin.
To begin with, globalisation has intrigued the young generation to earn in the early stage of their life so as to fulfil myriad of dreams they have which can not be accomplish without an extra amount of money in their hands. Furthermore, many are of the view opting to work directly after school that give them an upper hand when looking for a post that is available in the market. For instance, a restaurant is hiring new staff members and people apply for the same but here the company will hire people who are in their youths and have the zeal to meet the targets in comparison to an older person. Hence, numerous reasons turn up to make it a beneficial decision.
By contrast, the disadvantage of going on a vacation, and not seeking university admission immediately after graduating from high school might decrease the chance of getting an admit for students.
This is because the universities assume that an individual would forget the fundamental concepts which they have learnt in previous years at school if they would have a gap-year in their resume.
For instance, they might score fewer marks in their undergraduate level exams, thereby, tarnishing the reputation of the institution. Therefore, it is said that it is prudent to take an admit promptly after completing twelfth grade.
To conclude, I would say that taking a year gap after schooling is one’s personal choice and every person needs and desires are different from others. So, it is good to follow one’s heart and do what he feels like doing rather than following others, and I think in my view, benefits outweighed the deficient.
- The charts show average level of participation in education and the highest education level of adults from 2000 to 2010 in Singapore 73
- the pursuit of profit and economic growth prioritize addressing social and environmental issues 56
- The charts show average level of participation in education and the highest education level of adults from 2000 to 2010 in Singapore 67
- Some people think the manufacturers and shopping malls should sell fewer packaged products while others argue that people have the responsibility to buy products with less packaging Discuss both views and give your own opinion 56
- Some people think that success is the best measure for intelligence while others think that intelligence can be measured in other ways What is your opinion 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 42, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...n today’s modernised world few students are preferring to take a leap year after attending hig...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...shall look at both sides of this coin. To begin with, globalisation has intrigu...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 106, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...o earn in the early stage of their life so as to fulfil myriad of dreams they have which...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n up to make it a beneficial decision. By contrast, the disadvantage of going o...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 175, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ol might decrease the chance of getting an admit for students. This is because the univ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 183, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
..., it is said that it is prudent to take an admit promptly after completing twelfth grade...
^^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...omptly after completing twelfth grade. To conclude, I would say that taking a y...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, look, so, still, therefore, as to, for instance, i think, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86419753086 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65887493354 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626543209877 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7953606587 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.230769231 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9230769231 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61538461538 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261203654843 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796508348061 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626373924317 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124921282707 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447459694897 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.