It is common practice for some students to take a gap year between high school and university in order to charitable work abroad in underdeveloped countries. What are the advantages and disadvantages for young people of doing volunteer work?
These days more and more student are going to poor country to help people. There are those who say that volunteering study at the poor county in the gap year is beneficial to the young student however, others believe that this working style is detrimental to the students who take a gap year. In this essay. I will examine the benefits and downsides of this phenomenon and provide my overall opinion.
From the overall perspective, there is a number of advantages of volunteer work at the backward countries for the young students. Perhaps main advantages of this trend is that they can gave opportunity to discover their career interest, to find oneself. A good illustration of this that such trip not only fun but also gives a change to socialize, engage in volunteering and understand the global issue and global culture. A further point in favor of volunteering work is that these students get to face challenges and gain life experience. As a result, they develop empathy to the other people and become mature and responsible adults.
Despite these arguments, there are also various disadvantages to charitable work for student who take gap year. The main disadvantages is that students may lose their concentration on theirs studies. This is because the new experience usually effect their mind and give trouble to follow regular university schedule. Secondly, volunteering study for a year lead to spend money and time. This may cause the financial trouble for the student in their academic years.
In a conclusion, it must be said that charitable work has clear advantages and disadvantages. Taking the above into account, it would be appear that there are more advantages than disadvantages between take a gap year to do volunteer work and not do it. If we can do volunteer work at the underdeveloped countries we can gain much more life experience.
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...ear to do volunteer work and not do it. If we can do volunteer work at the underde...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99356913183 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87783326441 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527331189711 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7684217271 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3529411765 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2941176471 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.64705882353 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3642215179 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108529710962 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0997812956152 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216294742172 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592712510292 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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