it is common thet people change thier locations more freqently than in the past. what are the reasons ?
is it positive or negative development?
Nowadays, the relationship between one nation to another nation has been getting stronger than before. It is argued that trade and cultural contact are improving tremendously among them, whilst others think that this movement will ruin their own national identities in many ways. This essay will discuss both points of view.
Owing to contact with neighbouring nations, the economic growth of that country will increase significantly. This is because, the import and export of goods are made possible when maintain a fair relationship between countries. Moreover, the culture contact also plays an indispensable role when adapting new customs, beliefs, and culture through which the social interaction will certainly improve when embrace them. For instance, many regions are trying to copy the western style of culture, food, clothing, faith or religion and so on.
Others, on the other hand, this phenomenon seriously ruin their countries real national identities. When people migrate to other countries, they may sometimes lose the exact sense of patriotism and nationalism. This is because , there is more chance to accustom the new culture and tradition and consequently, the importance of their parent nations identity will decline gradually. For instance, the vast number of refugees follow the new national identity, if they reach a new nation such as, the UK, Canada and so on.
To conclude, although the relationship between countries that ensures enormous economic development and opportunities, I believe that it will adversely impact on own nations identity. Thus, the authority should implement new laws and programmes in order to preserve parent countries identity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, may, moreover, so, thus, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60311284047 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80814154108 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642023346304 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9829845466 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.769230769 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7692307692 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0274101514965 0.244688304435 11% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0107064846005 0.084324248473 13% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0161035296075 0.0667982634062 24% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.01784205676 0.151304729494 12% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.010926616684 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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