It is considered that the change is more beneficial to people than trying to avoid it and have everything remain the same. Do the advantages of change outweigh the disadvantages?
It is frequently argued that alteration is more crucial to people rather than remained stable and preventing to occur it. However, I strongly believe that the benefits of modification on people's life surpass its drawbacks.
On the one hand, the alteration on humans' life is essential for almost everyone in order to eliminate monotonous life. It is not coincidence that numerous people who are inclined to get rid of constant life have a tendency to get recommendation from psychologists. Furthermore, it is undeniable factor that transformation can contribute to mankind to gain myriad success. For instance: one of my acquaintances had suffered from cancer for 2 years. He was extremely introvert and did not have any intentions to speak to anybody. When he acquaintanced with some self-development books he decided to change. As a result, he became more extravert and positive. This unwanted disease commenced to be vanished by his belief and bravery.
On the other hand, the necessity of transformation could be unforeseen for several communities. Some people do not get accustomed with various modifications and it takes for a long time to become used to it. For this reason, this trend inevitably leads to numerous obnoxious situations on humans' life.
In conclusion, having acquaintanced with both aspects, I consider that the advantages of alterations could exceed its drawbacks.
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- Money should be spent on creating new public buildings such as museums or town halls rather than renovating the existing ones. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
- Money should be spent on creating new public buildings such as museums or town halls rather than renovating the existing ones. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
- It is considered that the change is more beneficial to people than trying to avoid it and have everything remain the same. Do the advantages of change outweigh the disadvantages? 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, so, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1171.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 220.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32272727273 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29034086003 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627272727273 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.8436950487 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.6428571429 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7142857143 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108558614873 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0360392972425 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448307592722 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0786516097929 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387815160346 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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