"It is daily broadcasted that traffic accidents in Vietnam have been rising at the alarming growth rate. What are the main reasons and solutions to this problem?"
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
In the daily life, the number of accidents caused by traffic has been increasing alarmingly.This can be atributted to a host of reason,This essay will examine the causes as well as the problems related to traffic problem.
The large number of accidents in road have been common nowadays due to some bad behaviors,which lead to a lot of servere injuries.In deed,as individuals tend to be more careless and impatient now,people may not comply with the rule. For instance,blowing the red light, which is commonplace in Vietnam,some Vietnamese people might not have enough perseverance to wait the red light turn into green.However, the issues of trafiic light has been strictly monitored, this trend is not still decreasing, In addition to the cause for traffic accidents, the road can be a key reason to this type of accidents.As more and more people are buying vehicles to transport, some narrow road not only is the factor of leading to traffic congestion but also is made accidents more popular.
To address this problem, the gorvement should more strict in locals's compliance with transporting, especically the traffic police.If the habitant will not follow the rule, the fine must be more heavier.Beside the authorities,individual shoul abide by the regulation.Furthermore, people shour raise awareness of being more carefull because.If the accidents happen,we will not survive or causing a great number of accidents then.
This accidents caused by traffic may not the unpopular topic.To consclusion, both of individuals and authority should have some awareness of traffic accident, the former should be the key factor .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, still, then, well, for instance, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1376.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.375 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.40217140167 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5546875 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 51.0 20.2975951904 251% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 136.494102437 49.4020404114 276% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 275.2 106.682146367 258% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.2 20.7667163134 247% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.4 7.06120827912 289% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157476146044 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0941501870594 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404817009792 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104811255791 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366393524859 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.5 13.0946893788 225% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 19.71 50.2224549098 39% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.2 11.3001002004 205% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.81 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.42 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 22.4 10.1190380762 221% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.