It is generally accepted that exercise is good for children and teenagers. Therefore, physical education and sport should be compulsory for the students in all schools. What do you think?

Physical education and sports should be mandatory in every school for all the students as it is considered a vital and essential work out for children and teenagers. In addition to that, it not only keeps the body fit and healthy but also develops the immune system, it also educates students about the nutritious food and proper diet.

Firstly, physical exercise plays a significant role to live a healthy life, by indulging children in this area enabled them to acquire many benefits of it. However, most of the children and teenagers are not acquainted with the righteous way to do exercise causes muscles strain and pain. Most of the schools are now adopting sports activities in their curriculum, therefore, knowledge about the subject and merits and demerits are now being acknowledged by the students of all ages. To illustrate, if the children are not aware of the drawbacks of doing wrong physical exercise, it would impact them detrimentally.

Secondly, along with the regular physical exercise, it is also very essential to intake proper diet, this includes the food rich in proteins, nutrients, and other necessary minerals. Physical education as a subject in school academic works as a catalyst in providing lucrative information about the balanced diet. Majority of students these days are more health conscious than earlier decades because of teaching physical education. To exemplify the situation, students have become healthier and fit, moreover, most of the teenagers are inclined towards bodybuilding which involves intensive exercise with proper diet and protein supplements.

To conclude, in today’s world where most people are struggling with a plethora of health problems, physical education and sports are the best measures to overcome these issues and it will make the future generation more healthy and immune to diseases.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1573.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36860068259 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79556145241 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563139931741 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.4052897401 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.0 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6363636364 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.54545454545 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270705755025 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0998096919489 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101911433837 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159218202108 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0944882566734 0.056905535591 166% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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