It is generally agreed that fewer people today write letters (through the mail or
post) compared with the twentieth century. What factors have led to this
situation? What will the impact be on the lives of future genereations?
The presence of modern technology, nowadays, has been changed the way people communicate, where they have no longer sending a letter via mail or post. There seem to be two main factors, and a number of impacts, which we will discuss here.
The major cause, perhaps, is time delivery which becomes longer. When persons send letters through post office to their relatives, they might wait for days to accept the reply, because the messages would go through long process until it is arrived by the receiver. Furthermore, It appears that delivering messages via electronic devices like handphone is considered to be more efficient and practical, where they could receive information within minutes even seconds only.
Regarding the effects felt by future generations, probably the main impact is lack of handwriting skills. We could see handwritten letters are often longer, that means people have habituated to write five to ten sentences, while writing through a gadget they just write one sentence or one word even worse. These habits might teach them to develop their writing skills. In addition, the other main impact is on employment rates that might decrease. When people prefer using gadgets as their communication tool, there would be a reduction in the post office revenue. This could lead to the decline of employees, especially when their wage goes down as well.
Taking everything into account, the causes of this trend are primarily to do with fast delivery and technology development. Meanwhile, the effects are felt in terms of handwritten skills and unemployment rates.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, regarding, second, so, well, while, in addition, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1331.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21960784314 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64663758449 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658823529412 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.203609102 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.384615385 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6153846154 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.30769230769 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148803459634 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0439811989888 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0368530828869 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0793958486821 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454544567188 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.