It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People have different views about where talents stem from. While some people hold the opinion that it is innate talents which is inherence when a child was born, I personally believe that talents are not available merits, it can be cultivated with passion, motivation, patience, and hard-working practice.
On the one hand, there are reasonable reasons to believe that one is given birth with particular talents. The main cause is that many musicians and sportsmen are excel in their fields at an early age. One good illustration of this is the famous musician, Mozart, who effortlessly capable of playing musical instruments and composing music since he was 4 years old. Another example is that many children have special abilities in different subjects like Mathematics, languages, or art at the time they just have practiced speak. Therefore, it is easy to see why their argument has gained support.
On the other hand, I opine that teaching and practicing can help children become gifted people in a certain area. In other words, people can acquire knowledge and success if they excel themself in their passions like sports or music. However, they have to attempt and practice more than others who have natural talents. For instance, in Viet Nam, many parents make plans and direct their children to follow a gifted subject early, such as piano, guitar, football, swimming,... or even lead them to master science subjects like maths or astronomy,... with a desire of fostering children's brain at the young age and preparing to future success. As this case reveals, talented children can be educated and cultivated through teaching, learning, and practicing.
To sum up, while some people think that talents descend from the inborn value, I am convinced that practice makes people perfect.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 163, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'excelled'.
Suggestion: excelled
...s that many musicians and sportsmen are excel in their fields at an early age. One go...
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Line 5, column 473, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...uch as piano, guitar, football, swimming,... or even lead them to master science s...
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Line 5, column 546, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...science subjects like maths or astronomy,... with a desire of fostering childrens ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, while, for instance, such as, in other words, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18493150685 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62434257555 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640410958904 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7456474504 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.933333333 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4666666667 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236386495125 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668044414762 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600221936159 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134681606853 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618745007686 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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