It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician
Some people believe that people are born with certain talent, such as instance for sport or music and art, and the others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.
I personally think talents does not play a very important role in their sport or music, because if you have the talent to do something but you refuse to do it, then you can not be good at it. Talent is like a boost, it just helps you at the beginning of learning to do something, you can not rely on your talent. From a research, you can get more and more talents from practicing and learning new things, you do not need to be born talented to have talents.
I would prefer to say that the second opinion which is “It is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician” because nothing is better than practicing and working. Talents without working, training and practicing is nothing. We can learn everything we love and our talents will slowly appear through our progress. From a research, sientists in America said that our sport or music skills are depended on the training we take and the progress we made, and it will make our hidden talents appear.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, so, then, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1022.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 226.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52212389381 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35216844083 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544247787611 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.1171379793 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.555555556 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1111111111 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.434365480834 0.244688304435 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.199468073764 0.084324248473 237% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.180846410662 0.0667982634062 271% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.386852666555 0.151304729494 256% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.295721903394 0.056905535591 520% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 78.4519038076 42% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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