People sleep less than they used in the past.
What do you think is the reason behind this?
What are the effects on them?
People sleep fewer hours than they used to do many years ago due to large amount of work and this creates fatigue.
People sleep less compared to the past because they work more. This is because they need their job to be done and the job market is more competitive than it used to be and if they don't get their job done, they might fall behind and lose their job. This means that people need to get up earlier to go to work and return home very late in the night, which is cutting their sleep time. For example, recent study the average employee in the 2000s works 2.4 more hours than the average employee in the 1960s.
The primary effect on these people is fatige. Most of the people don't have enough 8 hours to sleep, they sleep only around 5 or 6 hours, this leads to energy deficiency, too tired and to live their lives properly and effectively. Days over days having a few time to sleep will make them suffer from tiredness, memory decline, poorer communication skills, will make them suffer a lot. For example, a soccer club hired a sleep expert, and the studied players perform much better. Those who slept 6 hours a night actually perform worse and often suffer from injuries.
In conclusion, people sleep fewer hours than they used to is because of longer working hours and the effect is exhaustion and tiredness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1094.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53941908714 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.12099363615 2.80592935109 76% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560165975104 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.177128932 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4545454545 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9090909091 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286431021386 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11502824246 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0794994454654 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192362698438 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346274061205 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 50.2224549098 150% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 78.4519038076 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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