It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
it can be observed that , nowadays, people do not have intimate relationship with their nearby residents. this tendency arises due to various factors, and I think that the government and individuals can be adopt several timely measures to alleviate this issue.
weakness of soft skill and effect of technology on personal leisure time can be the primary factors contributing to the problem mentioned. regarding the former, communal places are not disappearing everywhere.many places built surrounding living areas, however, people are rarely visiting these destinations to have a strengthened relationship with their neighborhood. Specially, people who have disadvantaged backgrounds with low social skills are often taking them far away from communal space.If these underlying causes are not efficiently tackled, they will be unconfident to create a new relationship with other people. regarding the advanced technology, in the vibrant cities, it is a matter that residents have too many choices for their relaxation after a hard day working, particularly such as cinemas, and game centers, and they can turn back to their home to watch television. this deprives them of chances for updating the information around their house through the neighbor. potentially driving them to live more isolation with the other house’s member
however, the minister and each person could take many actions to mitigate or even reverse this problem. A more fundamental approach toward awareness should be increasing education and creating more social skill programmes. these measures could significantly increasing the confident when talking with strangers. that is a reason why they can be more welcoming and they can completely ability to have a closer relationship with their neighbors. Additionally, in order to overcome these problems is making a party ,which invites the neighbor more frequently. By this way, the dweller can have sensible reason for meeting and getting information from neighbors, furthermore, they can help each other in job opportunities when they are making friends with each other.
In conclusion, the weakness of living skill and the choices of activities after working can contribute to loosening relationships with neighbors. i believe that the courses and parties can play a crucial role in address this issue
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, regarding, so, then, well, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1990.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60563380282 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01993335606 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583098591549 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 604.8 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.6717146153 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.666666667 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.93333333333 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169035480689 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617683091898 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0260789652754 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105784980803 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0242448215439 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.