It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sport person or musician.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Although it is sometimes thought by some that people have inherent abilities for certain activities such as sports and music, others consider that any child can develop these talents. Personally, I think these claims are both true due to my experiences in life.
Even though it seems mystical, most people who became great in sports started demonstrating such gift from a very tender age. Thus, it can only be supposed, they had this inherent ability. Moreover, it is witnessed that people who became a model in sport or music had a family history of such activities. For instance, Michael Jackson, who later became the king of pop, had a father who was a musician, and so were his siblings (the Jackson Five).
On the other hand, the development of skills is learnt and dexterity is gained through much practice. In other words, any child who is exposed to these types of learning processes, cultivates the capacity for such act. One of the greatest footballer of all times, Pele, was taught how to play soccer at a football academy in Brazil. Whereas he was not the best at the time, he was consistent and at age 18, he was an international icon in soccer to be reckoned with.
In conclusion, I believe that even though music and sport runs in the family, as children from these homes are exceptionally clever in learning such skills later in life, these abilities can also be learnt by children who are exposed to such trainings.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, thus, whereas, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1184.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.736 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60097212596 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3463053454 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.636363636 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7272727273 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8181818182 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274548754145 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0998374484986 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0952466737248 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176634306361 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105931023967 0.056905535591 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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