Is it good for children to start using computers from an early age and spend long hours on them? Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.
In this contemporary world, people, especially children, tend to use computers a lot. For many people, exposure to computers is harmful to children while others opine the opposite. However, there are both merits and demerits to deciding to do this. In my perspective, letting children use computers for long hours brings more harm than good.
On the bright side, early exposure to computers can be beneficial. One of the main positives of it is that children will be much more familiar with technology. Because children are fast-learners, they are easier to get used to computers, which has some good aspects. For instance, they can explore the world, broaden their mind through computer’s screens. This can be helpful for children when they reach school age.
Turning to the other side of the argument, overusing computers can be an issue to these preschoolers. To be more precise, computers can directly affect children’s well-being. Using their eyesight as an example. This often leads to short-sightedness, astigmatism and so on. Not only their eyesight is damaged, they will also suffer from obesities, damaged spine.
Another issue is that children can be addicted to computers. In other words, video games and the internet are so charming that children cannot control themselves. This process takes time and can be especially challenging if addicted to computers. Also, some contents can be inappropriate and need to be supervised by parents.
All things considered, letting children use computers from an early age and spend long hours on them is harmful. You need to supervise these preschoolers so that children can experiment the full potential of computers. Personally, I believe there are more harmful effects than the advantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, well, while, for instance, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31654676259 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97545294393 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579136690647 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.8236836395 49.4020404114 38% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.380952381 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2380952381 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.04761904762 7.06120827912 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295911066181 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0930286654321 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114072735969 0.0667982634062 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183211667611 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101246520577 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.69 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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