It has become easier and more affordable for people to travel to other countries. Do you think it is positive or a negative development? Give your opinion and relevant example from your experience.
Even though travelling unplugs a person from pushes and pulls of the day, it is not very often that one can go for it due to the busy schedules. But, people do travel for various reasons other that rejuvenation. These days foreign trips have become a trend because they have become more economical with the development of transport facilities. I strongly feel this is a positive development and will discuss the contributing factors in the upcoming paragraphs.
Commencing with, overseas travel allows the exchange of culture, languages and traditions among various nations. To explain, this enhances the the understanding and respect of people who belong to other religions and follow contrasting rituals. This can be clearly seen by organization named International Society for Krishna Consciousness, whose founder went to United States of America in the 1960s to propagate Indian philosophy, as a result of which there are thousands of devotees of lord Krishna in American nowadays.
Another major dominating factor is that people can get work experience from different international companies. This leads to them getting better job opportunities in their native as well as other countries. Moreover, it gives wider choice to students to avail their higher education from the finest universities of the world. For instance, Ministry of Education, India recorded the highest number of students in 2021 to 2022 who moved abroad for learning subjects that are not available in Indian colleges and universities.
To encapsulate, travelling beyond national boundaries gives more exposure and changes one's perception towards the world. I opine that travelling can be refreshing as well as beneficial for growth of an individual, thus government should inspire dwellers to do this for their holistic growth and development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, thus, well, for instance, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1548.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46996466431 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00821086652 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636042402827 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0445871658 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.076923077 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218570495323 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0739528971794 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462748502681 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124368362607 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559736774526 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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