It has been argued that gift giving should not be encouraged, because money is often wasted on things that people do not like or want.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?
Many people believe that it is better to give money instead of make presents. In my opinion, this option sometimes is very useful, although there are reasons which is not fully acceptable.
It is evident, that giving money to someone instead of giving him a gift may be proved relieving for both. This is because money can be used in a more flexible way which may result more appropriate and appreciated from the person who receives the money in change of a gift. For example, if a boy who wants a toy receives a cloth instead is unhappy, while if he is being given money he could use them to buy the toy that he wants. As we see money are more convenient as a solution and also keep both sides highly satisfied.
On the other hand, gifts are more than the satisfaction of a present circumstance. Presents sometimes represent something which bond people together. These items, very personalized, are meant to establish a connective memory and common experience between the two involved parts, he who gives the present and the other who takes it. For example, a ring with diamonds may have the same price as a car but there is no one that when he proposes to his future spouse would give her, on the act, the correspondent amount of money instead of the ring. This proves the necessity of giving presents.
In conclusion, it is clear that money is usually more convenient than giving to someone a present, but there are occasions and circumstances that it is definitely necessary to make presents.
- The charts show where people get their news and how much they trust these sources.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 73
- Nowadays, more and more people are choosing to socialise online rather than face to face. Is this a positive or a negative development? 73
- It has been argued that gift giving should not be encouraged, because money is often wasted on things that people do not like or want. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 106, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put after the verb 'is'.
Suggestion: is sometimes
...ke presents. In my opinion, this option sometimes is very useful, although there are reasons...
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Line 13, column 192, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... definitely necessary to make presents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1250.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71698113208 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65303147469 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550943396226 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.593567414 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.166666667 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0833333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168678560057 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676833045017 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418153531264 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0985767593139 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365890928047 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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