It has been claimed that workers over 50 are not responsive to rapidly changing ideas in the modern workplace and that for this reason younger workers are to be preferred. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
As we live in a modern world, all things around us change day by day. Workers over 50 are not responsive to rapidly changing ideas in the modern workplace that is why younger workers are to be preferred. Overall I agree with this statement and I will explain my opinion.
It is true that there are workers over 50 in some workplaces. I think that working with them is not easy, because they are getting older. It is difficult to understand them. As we live in technological life we have most of new ideas, which sometimes old people do not understand. At the second elders tired more faster than youngers. For example, our teacher, who teaches us geography is about 60 years old. He always tired and very nervous.
Young workers preferred more, due to the fact that they are young. They have a power. Also,those people studied at contemporary universities and understand new ideas, support them.
In conclusion, young people preferred more than workers over 50, because of strength and modern thinking.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 307, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'faster' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: faster
... understand. At the second elders tired more faster than youngers. For example, our teacher...
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Line 3, column 90, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , those
... they are young. They have a power. Also,those people studied at contemporary universi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, so, for example, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 833.0 1615.20841683 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 173.0 315.596192385 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81502890173 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63113107746 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647398843931 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 506.74238477 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.151319056 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.5 106.682146367 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.3571428571 20.7667163134 60% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28873964385 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0874556460491 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.142056614125 0.0667982634062 213% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181115760505 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12846053082 0.056905535591 226% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 13.0946893788 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 50.2224549098 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.79 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 78.4519038076 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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