It has been said that people who read for pleasure have more developed imaginations and language skills than people who prefer to watch TV. Do you agree or disagree?
It is true that someone believes that reading for pleasure does wonder for imagination and language skills than people who have a thing for watching TV. I completely agree with the positive impact of reading.
To begin with, in terms of the development of creativity, works in every genre could enhance human imaginations. In my opinion, a work of literature are written more detailed and lively than films, TV news and so on: hundred of pages could be shortened in some minutes. Thus, reading allows people to picture themselves about the specific scenes or the details in their own ways, compared to watch TV, everything is put in a mold which limits viewers’ imagination. For example, I am a big fan of Harry Potter and both read and watch this world-wide famous series. One thing that I have obtained from my personal reading experience is that I could come up with creatively manifold theories for each detail or scene, particularly the final battle between Harry Potter and Voldemort.
Moreover, the more materials we read, the better we get in language skills. One of the language skills that people could improve the most is reading skill. According to research conducted in the US, people who read one book on a weekly basis could boost reading speed to four or five times greater than those who don’t build this habit. As a result, when language skills are enhanced, which support tremendously for schoolwork, tasks because a huge amount of qualified materials are written in a variety of forms. I am an IELTS learner and after reading two out of eight parts of Harry Potter, the reading band score of mine has increased significantly by 1,5.
In conclusion, I fully agree with those who argue that reading could leave a huge positive impact on imagination and language skills, which sitting in front of TV will never do.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 218, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
...d lively than films, TV news and so on: hundred of pages could be shortened in some min...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90127388535 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6496910981 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595541401274 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6907596806 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.384615385 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1538461538 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.386816799955 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129934994214 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11667116389 0.0667982634062 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.259795708396 0.151304729494 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11083720541 0.056905535591 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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