it is important to be concerned about international events, even if those events have no direct impact on our lives
It is a common belief that people do not pay attention to international events, as long as they are unlikely to directly impact on our life. However, I firmly support the idea that we need to approach events from the different countries to take some experience and come up with these issues of our nation as well.
Firstly, caring about international news that nations realize the global statue at that moment to help the citizen of other countries overcome the challenges. It is the way that we can share resources to aid other nations in war, disasters, or disease. For instance, in world war, some countries receive the army force from the others or some products such as food, medicine or weapons. Moreover, international help can appeal international peace for some nations in war.
On the top of that, approaching the international statues, it is the easy way to better understanding of how to deal with the problems in ours countries. Many societies face with many kinds of similar challenges, we can take experiences and prepare for solutions to cut significantly the bad situation. For example, countries are facing with much deadly diseases, taking the information from that case, our nations can prepare vaccines and find the way to prevent citizens from the dangerous things. In recent day, Amazon forest is the hazard for the world’s atmosphere, especially nations around, knowing the accident, those countries ready to how can improve and prevent the pollution.
To sum up, observing the global news that is really helpful to all nations. For these reasons, it is the important part in developing our country.
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- the government should impose a fee on drivers who use their vehicles during the rush hour to help cut down on air pollution from exhausting fumes 73
- The table below gives information about government expenditure in five sectors relating to domestic policy in Germany Italy and the United Kingdom in 2009 49
- Although more and more people read the news on the internet, newspaper, will remain the main source of news for the majority of people. Do you agree or disagree with the statement 56
- the graph below shows the employment rate of each gender in four countries in 2002 71
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, moreover, really, so, well, for example, for instance, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1368.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06666666667 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83618592784 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577777777778 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4038127217 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.0 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132135614793 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0531691260259 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566463902495 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0873934441461 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502125194886 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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