It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?
Nowadays, there are lots of children having a frivolous attitude with their mistakes because parents always spoil them. Other parents may give you harsh punishments when you made some mistakes or have a bad score on your test. Personally, I agree that giving punishments is a good way to help children recognize their mistake. Punishment here doesn't mean that we have to beat them or yell at them. There are many efficient ways to punish your child, so now we are going to discuss about this.
To begin with, early childhood experience play a big role and lasting a big impact on someone's life and that means parents should teach their child in a correct way to help them to have a right perception and they have a ability to know if it is right or wrong. Children are curious and immature sometime so it is to understand that they want to explore or questioned on something that are new to them. For instance, your child ask you about sex problem, you don't need to mad at them instead of explain to them about it in a correct way. If parents always yell at your child they will get scared of everything and lose the confidence. Physically beating your child must not used for any reasons because it will last a big scar inside their mental.
However, punishments only used for teach children a lessons not intimidate them. So parents and teachers have to think a way to punish children that are both effective and help them identify the problem. Sometimes taking away a favorite toy or thing can be helpful where no physical punishment are being used.
To conclude, punishment is necessary to teach children and help them to recognize their problem and mistake. However, the punishment should not be physical.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 344, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ecognize their mistake. Punishment here doesnt mean that we have to beat them or yell ...
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Line 2, column 87, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'someones'' or 'someone's'?
Suggestion: someones'; someone's
... a big role and lasting a big impact on someones life and that means parents should teac...
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Line 2, column 149, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a correct way" with adverb for "correct"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... means parents should teach their child in a correct way to help them to have a right perception...
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Line 2, column 220, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...o have a right perception and they have a ability to know if it is right or wrong...
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Line 2, column 459, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ur child ask you about sex problem, you dont need to mad at them instead of explain ...
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Line 2, column 520, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a correct way" with adverb for "correct"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...hem instead of explain to them about it in a correct way. If parents always yell at your child t...
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Line 3, column 51, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lesson' or simply 'lessons'?
Suggestion: a lesson; lessons
...unishments only used for teach children a lessons not intimidate them. So parents and tea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67549668874 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48584431435 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526490066225 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8037358981 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1333333333 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1333333333 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.26666666667 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270038352558 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103502602647 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422129128189 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186702326592 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277601461761 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.