It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?
Today, it is a great significance for kids to know about the difference between correct and incorrect behaviours at the early age. Additionally, some punishment is valuable to encourage them to learn this diffirence.From my point of view , I totally agree with this statement with a host of reasons.
First and foremost , getting to know the distinction between the right and wrong actions when an individual at an ealy age is greatly crucial. As a result, the punishment plays a essential role in the way how to encourage children to know the perks of having right behaviours, which is extremely straightforward . If children do the great tiny things with a suitable attitude , they will get a much better result all the time. However, if they try their best to do the illegal actions, their endings will never be acceptable. Futhermore, if parents do not have the strict punishment in the necessary cases, their children may be then too challenging and playful to be trained with the right behaviours with a great attitude . For instance : according to the recent survey of VTV news, the number of students having the uncontroled actions to adults in the primary school in Ha Noi without teaching from schools and relatives , have been increasing steadily from 23% to 35% in the last 2 years.
As a result, parents and teachers should be allowed to have some punishments to terrible children such as cleaning the whole classrooms and school yard in order to let them know how they can be punished if they do the wrong things. Additionally, they must be told the disadvantages of having crummy behaviours.
In conclusion, for the reasons I have mentioned above, I strongly believe that the whole community should have the right punishment in order to help the children know the right since they were kids.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, so, then, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91147540984 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87070721161 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554098360656 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.2810998443 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.181818182 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7272727273 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63636363636 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290733049411 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107512561954 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073160135835 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182738848976 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0679646216483 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.