It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion ?
Nowadays, it is believed that important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Then punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. In this statement i depend for giving some advantages and disadvantages. Both of them will be discussed carefully.
On the one hand, there is no doubt that teaching children with following punishment will bring benefit to them. Especially for building their character and also ability in real life. For example, people who have reached several important role in their organization have studied basic education in early age. Absolutely their skills will be better than others. It is a good circumstance by applying this methods for children.
In contrary, Giving punishment also make many bad effect for children. The proponent of this view argue divided by two basic reason. Firstly; children will receive parental demanding then influence them to afraid about punishment. While, it is will damage their brain gradually and also mental. Secondly, the wrong punishment lead them for doing criminal activity then create devastation around environment. Moreover, obligate to manage carefully about punishment that will educate the kids.
To sum up, in my opinion personally i agree by applying some punishment but its required by giving awards for them, hopefully it is will be a treatment to encourage their skill. then in the future people will hold a educate habit for the next generation
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, no doubt, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1247.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30638297872 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76965383125 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608510638298 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.7829181615 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.3529411765 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8235294118 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23529411765 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347932198554 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112358072119 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126271590104 0.0667982634062 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233147152191 0.151304729494 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.172841839709 0.056905535591 304% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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