Children are innocent and they cannot differentiate right and wrong. Therefore, punishments are required to lead them in the right path until they acquire maturity. And I believe,parents and teachers should correct them with small punishments continuous advice.
In childhood days, most children do some wrong deeds because they are not aware of the consequences of these acts. For example, many children like to play with fire which is attractive for children because of its color, but they do not know the sufferings of burns. Usually, they do not pay attention to the words of their parents, because they are too young to heed the advice. In this difficult situation, parents can try some punishments if the children did not listen their advice. Another important thing is, a punished child for some offence, will not repeat the same mistake again , since he remembers the pain of physical punishment. And i certainly believe minor physical punishments needed to guide the child in a good manner.
However, the parents could punish the child only in the case of child is not giving enough importance to their words. Parents should take the effort of continuous advice and counselling to children in order to convince the out comes of the wrong doings. Many psychologists have a opinion that , repeated advice will reduce the tendency in children to do something wrong. Thus, parents should make sure that they well explained about the out comes of wrong deeds to children. if they did not hear their words, parents can give some small physical punishments to their children.
To conclude, i certainly believe small punishments needed at times to brought up the children in the right path. But parent should take care of the health of the children, while they are punishing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05423728814 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65514208677 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515254237288 0.561755894193 92% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.854633376 49.4020404114 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.1875 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4375 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9375 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248366085913 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0921213471667 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0311005433379 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167692198343 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0130616584011 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => The average readability is low. Need to improve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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