It is important for people to take risks, in both professional lives and personal lives.
Do the advantages of taking these risks outweigh the disadvantages?
Taking risks in life has been an unavoidable stage for humanity. It depends on people’s situation and what kind of risk that they take because this could bring certain benefits but there will also have some drawbacks.
Taking uncertainties sometimes can bring numerous advantages. In the career path, this can lead to rewards and opportunities when people are doing things that they have never done before. That can bring them promotions, higher salary or even interest in the profession. This also appears in personal lives, if people are risk taking, they could have new experiences, better relationships and grow-up in characteristics in return. For example, despite culture differences and risk of society’s vice, people travel to a new country to enrich and fulfill their foreign experiences.
However, this could have several disadvantages. Taking risks can sometimes lead to failure and disappointment, which could cause emotional and financial damage. For instance, employees can lose their job after taking the risk at their task. Additionally, youngsters today can lose a lot of money when they invest in the coin market without careful research.
In my own experience, the advantages of taking risks eclipse its harms. The reason for this claim is that I decided to apply for a new job without experience and specialized knowledge on it, but however I have learnt a lot and have good colleagues in this new company. Furthermore, I went on a Ha Giang trip which was dangerous but I had a memorable time with my friends.
In conclusion, risk taking is necessary in life. However, it should be considered carefully based on different occasions in order to maximize the profits it could bring back.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 192, Rule ID: BUT_NEVERTHELESS[1]
Message: Use simply 'but'.
Suggestion: but
...rience and specialized knowledge on it, but however I have learnt a lot and have good colle...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20143884892 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93012494847 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60071942446 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.7446999639 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.375 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.375 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257283382982 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0959367371477 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0789453022837 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152715542108 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449033689876 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.