It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and personal lives.
Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?
In the age of competition, it is essential for human to accept threat in their expert existence as well as individual life. While there are some negative impacts, I would argue that these are outweighed by advantages and my point of view in this matter will be discussed in further paragraph with a suitable conclusion.
On the one hand, some folks are put into danger to themselves in order to achieve goal. For example, if a person has a job interview today but there is an unrest situation on the way to the organization where the job test is held. In this situation the person has to accept risk taking part to the interview because he/she wanted the for his better career otherwise, he has no chance to get the job. Another point is that if someone wants to invest in capital market and there is always some threat to profit or loss but taking risk may earn profit.
On the other hand, people are not interested to accept hazard due to their believe in calm and quiet and they always wait for chance to achieve something whatever the time need for it. They have feared to take risk because they may lose something rather than achieve their goal so that they want to stable situation. For instance, some humanities do not want to play football in the rain because it may affect their physical fitness.
To sum up, although there is some drawback to take risk for master and individuals, I firmly believe that there are more positive sides to accept risk to achieve the professional and personal goals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 76, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'belief' (noun) instead of believe (verb)?
Suggestion: belief
...nterested to accept hazard due to their believe in calm and quiet and they always wait ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1239.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58888888889 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41775837411 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566666666667 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 34.7621921058 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.9 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250970703186 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0927664838964 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612002420584 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15315349218 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575239985542 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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