It could not be denied that technological advancement has annihilated traditional cultures. Technology and tradition are not well-matched. In my opinion, everything has two sides.
In the beginning, it could be argued that because of the development of technology, traditional cultures are unable to find. This can be attributed to the fact that people prefer modern things to traditional ones. It is widely known that children nowadays are more interested in playing video games rather than traditional games, namely toy figurines which they deem old-fashioned. Moreover, traditional musical instruments, like the gourd zither, are being replaced by new innovations such as music-making software. For that reason, there are the number of folk trade villages, such as Xuan La powdered seed toy craft village, La Khe weaving village, and Dao Xa ethnic musical instrument making village withdrawn.
Though it may be true that traditional culture would be eroded by technological improvement, it should also be borne in mind that both of them can exist together. One reason for this is that concrete steps can be taken in order to bring these forgotten traditional cultures back into our society. This can be illustrated by the fact that traditional performances and traditional musical instruments can be broadcasted by the media, news, and festival. For example, there was a Chinese TV show named “The Coming One Superband” where participants used their musical instruments including classical, modern, and traditional ones, namely cello, double bass, electric guitar, percussion, suona, dombra, and matouqin to form 4 bands. Hence, the viewers will figure out about traditional musical instruments. As a result, traditional cultures will be recovered and boosted with the expansion of technology.
To summarize, in some cases, it is impossible that technology and tradition are incompatible, but traditional culture is not wiped out by the strong current of technology. We can preserve our treasured traditions which reflect our origins and roots, and at the same time manage to develop our society with the full utilization of technology.
- The graph below shows how elderly people in the Europe spent their free time between 1980 and 2010 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- The pie charts below compare the proportion of energy capacity in gigawatts GW in 2015 with the predictions for 2040 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
- It is inevitable that as technology develops traditional cultures must be lost Technology and tradition are incompatible You cannot have both together To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 89
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, may, moreover, so, well, for example, such as, as a result, in my opinion, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1817.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50606060606 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11226874042 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612121212121 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.9355779114 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.5625 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.625 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288020399301 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11647271935 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682931802157 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195381263827 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469719912646 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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